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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 05:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)

Alcohol in association football

Carlsberg-sponsored Liverpool F.C. jersey
Carlsberg-sponsored Liverpool F.C. jersey

Created by Unknown Temptation (talk). Self-nominated at 20:36, 16 January 2022 (UTC).


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Thank you for a useful article about alcohol in sport. Just one issue: the ALT0 hook idea is fine, but it needs rewording. "There were none remaining" needs to be replaced with something like "such sponsorship had ended". This is because "Premier League" is the subject of the first clause, so at the moment the second clause is saying that there was no Premier League remaining, which is not your intention. So please could you supply an ALT1 as a rewording of ALT0? If that can be done, then this nom should be good to go. Storye book (talk) 10:28, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

ALT1 to T:DYK/P1 without image