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The first sentence in this says "On Wikipedia, any subject that meets all inclusion guidelines is entitled to an article...". I would submit that the word "entitled" is not the correct word. It implies some sort of right. I'd suggest "On Wikipedia, any subject that meets all inclusion guidelines is likely to merit an article...". Niteshift36 (talk) 21:04, 7 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
If you think that sounds better, feel free to change it. Sebwite (talk) 23:45, 7 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]